Hi Ta’ani, First off I think that your writing about Rugby is a good idea because that sport has been blowing up. The main thing I spotted about your writing is that you talked about Tonga going against Kiwis and that game was amazing. I really like how you used expression and explained what happened. Next time you could proofread your writing and then publish just so that you don’t leave any mistakes.
Hi Ta’ani,
ReplyDeleteFirst off I think that your writing about Rugby is a good idea because that sport has been blowing up. The main thing I spotted about your writing is that you talked about Tonga going against Kiwis and that game was amazing. I really like how you used expression and explained what happened. Next time you could proofread your writing and then publish just so that you don’t leave any mistakes.
Mikaela