Thursday, 29 October 2015


Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
I had a really exciting holiday I went fishing with my family it was really fun. We went to Point England Beach and the Basin. My mum baited the hooks for us then we went to the

basin first. It was not far
from Pont England and we were at the basin.
the basin was huge it was was shaped as a sequel

Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
I dropped my hook in the water and it went fast into the water.
Then I waited. There was no sound. Then it moved? I pulled it up slowly it was a crab it was a little crab. I put it back in the water and carried on fishing. There was no sound it was quiet and the line was not moving. Then it was

moving hard but I think it ripped but anyway I pulled it up and it was the rip.I went in a different spot where the rip wasn't Dear it was all quiet. I watched my sister do fishing she was a bit good at catching crabs little crabs that are in the water. It was the first time

going fishing. I was happy it was my first time because it was really really fun. I wanted to go to Point England now we went fast because it was nearly lunch time so we went to pont england beach it was close to the basin it was cool at the basin but now we are going to pont england beach. when we got there it was sunny and the tide was in so it was a good day to go fishing. I went to a good spot. It was on the big rock, it was huge it was bigger than me. I started fishing with a net. I went into the water and got my net. I put it in the water then

I waved it around. I pulled it up and it had lots of crabs, even a big crab was in the net. I put my net back in the water and I waved it. I pulled it up and there was lots of crabs in the net I had to go I went home and I had a great time with my family.   
Sums up how you felt about the experience.

I had a really good time in the holidays. I caught lots of crabs and there was some big crabs to. It was My first time fishing so that’s why I was so happy I  In joint going to the beach with my family and going fishing I felt really happy   

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