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Monday, 27 November 2017

Recound Writing


today i did a planning on recount writing 

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  1. Hi Ta’ani,
    First off I think that your writing about Rugby is a good idea because that sport has been blowing up. The main thing I spotted about your writing is that you talked about Tonga going against Kiwis and that game was amazing. I really like how you used expression and explained what happened. Next time you could proofread your writing and then publish just so that you don’t leave any mistakes.

    Mikaela

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