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Thursday, 30 July 2015

Revising Writing

Today I have been learning about draft. Draft is like an acrostic poem each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we learnt about D which stands for deleting. Deleting means taking out words and phrases.

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

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My copy
Miss Paton has a cat. called Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a big pain. He would like to sniff my rubbish tin. He always come to my house hungry. Oscar likes to sleep on my couch. He doesn't like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.


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