I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ms Tapuke.
Monday, 10 April 2017
kete of knowledge
today I have answear some qustions about the three kete of knowledge on slide two it says what did you bring in your kete today that means what did you bring in your bag today.
my idea for a fun weekend
Rainbows end is a theme park that people all over new Zealand go to it is the main theme park of new Zealand. rainbows end is a place to spend with your family. This theme park is part of Auckland it has over 25 rides. My favourite is the go karts the go carts are like a mini car but it doesn't have a
out layering on it. There are also other exciting rides some are scary and some are average the scariest ride is probably the free fall it goes up and then straight down but at first when you're up there it is not as scary but when it heads down it will
probably give you goosebumps. A theme park like this is it’s own theme park and the cool thing about it is that it is the only one in the world it sits in Oakland. The most popular thing in Oakland compared to the sky tower and the theme park rainbows, rainbows end is just more fun
How did they get the name rainbows end
There were absolutely no other theme parks in new Zealand about 44 years ago then. Suddenly they think of something big like a roller coaster it was perfect but is would cost so a small team worked really hard to come up with an name that they would call the theme park it was rainbows end it’s a magical name it was perfect.
If you have never been to rainbows end you are missing out on a whole lot of fun because it is one of the community services of everywhere around new Zealand it cost 50 dollars for each person so your should try it out before tickets run out if they do your still have tomorrow it also has nighttime severe.
Today in week 5 i have written a story of what i think is a fun weekend. It is a explanations about rainbows end it has sub titles to give you a idea of what the next paragraph is going to be about.
editing work
Attempt 1
Rainbows end is a theme park that people all over new Zealand go to it is the main theme park of new Zealand. rainbows end is a place to spend with your family. This theme park is part of Auckland it has over 25 rides. My favourite is the go karts the go carts are like a mini car but it doesn't have a
out layering on it. There are also other exciting rides some are scary and some are average the scariest ride is probably the free fall it goes up and then straight down but at first when you're up there it is not as scary but when it heads down it will
probably give you goosebumps. A theme park like this is it’s own theme park and the cool thing about it is that it is the only one in the world it sits in Oakland. The most popular thing in Oakland compared to the sky tower and the theme park rainbows, rainbows end is just more fun
How did they get the name rainbows end
There were absolutely no other theme parks in new Zealand about 44 years ago then. Suddenly they think of something big like a roller coaster it was perfect but is would cost so a small team worked really hard to come up with an name that they would call the theme park it was rainbows end it’s a magical name it was perfect.
If you have never been to rainbows end you are missing out on a whole lot of fun because it is one of the community services of everywhere around new Zealand it cost 50 dollars for each person so your should try it out before tickets run out if they do your still have tomorrow it also has nighttime severe.
Attempt 2
Rainbows end is a theme park that people all over new Zealand go to it is the only
theme park of new Zealand. rainbows end is a place to spend time with your family. This park is part of Auckland it has over 25 rides. My favourite is the go karts the go carts are like a mini car but it doesn't have a
out layering on it. There are also other exciting rides some are scary and some are average the scariest ride is probably the free fall it goes up and then straight down but at first when you're up there it is not as scary but when it heads down it will
probably give you goosebumps. A theme park like this is it’s own theme park and the cool thing about it is that it is the only one in the world and it sits in Auckland. The most popular thing in compared to the sky tower and the theme park rainbows, rainbows end is just more popular
How did they get the name rainbows end
There were absolutely no other theme parks in new Zealand about 44 years ago then. Suddenly they think of something big like a roller coaster it was perfect but is would cost, so a small team worked really hard to come up with an name that they would call the theme park it was rainbows end it’s a magical name it was perfect.
If you have never been to rainbows end you are missing out on a whole lot of fun because it is one of the community services of everywhere around new Zealand it cost 50 dollars for each person so your should try it out before tickets run out if they do your still have tomorrow it also has nighttime severe.
today I edaited my work to make it sound better and make sence in the start of the year we had a writing test all of us had 45 minutes to write about a specil part of our comunity atemt 1 is up the top and the secound one is on the bottom of the first text they are the same text but the bottom one is eadited alot
Talking points
today i answeard some qustions on slide to the first on was about Donald trup being a great presaten. this is your idea of what he should be and not be and other intresting questions like sports and girls are smarter than boys.
Friday, 7 April 2017
WALT: Add and subtract fractions and decimals
WALT: Add and subtract fractions and decimals. today 07,04/17 I tryed to figuer out these equsions these where adding, subtracting, fracstions, and decimals the one that i found the hardest was slide 8 the one that i found easy was slide 2 my favrioute slide was slide 12 .
Thursday, 6 April 2017
teck week
savary tech food this is week tens work of tech this is my tastyest eperiment yet it is called beef cobla
add and subtract frcctions and decimals
today 06/04/17 i used a tenplate of this to answear the write qusition
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